You have assembled a proposal for a very engaging project. Your ideas are strong, and you clearly believe in the possible impact that the proposed organization could have.
You very well describe how this project could impact the tourism industry, but how will it impact the local community? You discuss holding consultative forums with the community to prepare and include them, but you should think further about how this project can improve and enhance the local community, in addition to the tourism community.
Are there other individuals or organizations working in this field, trying to implement similar ideas? If so, you should connect with them and learn from them and from their established business plans so that you can more effectively and efficiently implement your proposed project. Then consider how your proposal is uniquely innovative and distinct from existing efforts and make this clear in your pitch.
To further outline the possible impacts, with how many hotels would you hope to work? And about how many tourists and locals would be impacted through the project?
Thank you, Christina, for sharing this interesting idea.
All best of luck to you -- Ann Glotzbach
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Dear Christine,
You have assembled a proposal for a very engaging project. Your ideas are strong, and you clearly believe in the possible impact that the proposed organization could have.
You very well describe how this project could impact the tourism industry, but how will it impact the local community? You discuss holding consultative forums with the community to prepare and include them, but you should think further about how this project can improve and enhance the local community, in addition to the tourism community.
Are there other individuals or organizations working in this field, trying to implement similar ideas? If so, you should connect with them and learn from them and from their established business plans so that you can more effectively and efficiently implement your proposed project. Then consider how your proposal is uniquely innovative and distinct from existing efforts and make this clear in your pitch.
To further outline the possible impacts, with how many hotels would you hope to work? And about how many tourists and locals would be impacted through the project?
Thank you, Christina, for sharing this interesting idea.
All best of luck to you -- Ann Glotzbach
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