It seems as though you are trying to do some good work and I commend your efforts. In particular your focus on involving a number of different partners from all segments of society is great-and necessary to work on this issue. I think it might help to strengthen your entry if you expanded a bit more on exactly what your organization does. For example- you say that you have served a total of 60 people- 20 inside your target areas and 40 outside. What exactly does this mean? What services did you provide? You also said that one goal of your organization is to identify people who have been trafficked. Can you explain how you intend to do this? Teasing out your conceptual framework and then creating a pathway through which you identify goals which are achieved by activities leading to intended outputs might be a great next step towards operationalizing some of the great goals encapsulated in your organization's mission.
I am looking forward to hearing more.
Thanks!
Laura Cardinal
Public Health and Human Trafficking Specialist
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Dear Sulaiman Kagiri;
It seems as though you are trying to do some good work and I commend your efforts. In particular your focus on involving a number of different partners from all segments of society is great-and necessary to work on this issue. I think it might help to strengthen your entry if you expanded a bit more on exactly what your organization does. For example- you say that you have served a total of 60 people- 20 inside your target areas and 40 outside. What exactly does this mean? What services did you provide? You also said that one goal of your organization is to identify people who have been trafficked. Can you explain how you intend to do this? Teasing out your conceptual framework and then creating a pathway through which you identify goals which are achieved by activities leading to intended outputs might be a great next step towards operationalizing some of the great goals encapsulated in your organization's mission.
I am looking forward to hearing more.
Thanks!
Laura Cardinal
Public Health and Human Trafficking Specialist
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