Congratulations on crafting a unique, innovative, and thoughtful proposal for International Peace Park Expeditions. You have clearly outlined your impact areas and your distinct position in the field as an innovator. With your education, experience, and convictions, you also seem to be an excellent fit as the leader of this project. Following I will offer some suggestions for you to consider as you further develop and implement the project.
What would the expeditions look like? How many tourists per expedition would you have, and how long would the expeditions last? What would the expedition fee be for the tourists, and what percentage of the fee would go to operating costs and to the local communities?
How will you recruit tourists and local community members to participate in the expeditions?
Describe further the “meaningful cross cultural interactions” that would happen between tourists and locals. How would you work with the local communities before, after, and during the expeditions?
Where geographically do you plan to begin the project? To what regions will you expand next? Tell more about the expansion plan and the ultimate goals for scope of impact in terms of numbers of tourists, peace parks, and local communities reached.
Thank you for your comments, I will surely revise the entry based on your feedback.
however, given the charachter restraints there is not any space to elaborate...which makes editing very challenging. I am aware the website does not yet work...we are almost done with it and should be ready to launch in the next 7-10 days, i just bought the url and figured that i would put it in. I have a complete business plan - that answers many of the questions you have already asked, and the website will provide many of those details as well. Lastly, it sounds like you didnt get to open the attached flyer - that answers some of the questions you asked.
can i give you a call to discuss once i have made the final round of edits, before the contest closes?
thanks
peace
todd
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Dear Todd,
Congratulations on crafting a unique, innovative, and thoughtful proposal for International Peace Park Expeditions. You have clearly outlined your impact areas and your distinct position in the field as an innovator. With your education, experience, and convictions, you also seem to be an excellent fit as the leader of this project. Following I will offer some suggestions for you to consider as you further develop and implement the project.
What would the expeditions look like? How many tourists per expedition would you have, and how long would the expeditions last? What would the expedition fee be for the tourists, and what percentage of the fee would go to operating costs and to the local communities?
How will you recruit tourists and local community members to participate in the expeditions?
Describe further the “meaningful cross cultural interactions” that would happen between tourists and locals. How would you work with the local communities before, after, and during the expeditions?
Where geographically do you plan to begin the project? To what regions will you expand next? Tell more about the expansion plan and the ultimate goals for scope of impact in terms of numbers of tourists, peace parks, and local communities reached.
(Also please note that the website link listed - www.peaceparkexpeditions.org – does not function.)
Thank you for your engaging proposal and for your commitment to making a positive global impact through tourism.
All best – Ann Glotzbach
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Thank you for your comments, I will surely revise the entry based on your feedback.
however, given the charachter restraints there is not any space to elaborate...which makes editing very challenging. I am aware the website does not yet work...we are almost done with it and should be ready to launch in the next 7-10 days, i just bought the url and figured that i would put it in. I have a complete business plan - that answers many of the questions you have already asked, and the website will provide many of those details as well. Lastly, it sounds like you didnt get to open the attached flyer - that answers some of the questions you asked.
can i give you a call to discuss once i have made the final round of edits, before the contest closes?
thanks
peace
todd
Hi everyone,
Our website - http://peaceparkexpeditions.org
just launched yesterday!!!
here is the launch email - http://tinyurl.com/olge4l
please check it out, and let me know your thoughts.
thanks
peace
todd
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