Could you explain a bit more how SOSIn Shop can help small and medium firms to access financial products (loans, funds etc.) in order to enable their growth?
I would love to hear your thoughts.
Kind regards,
Renata
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Финансијама за мала и средња предузећа
Поздрав Ненад,
Хвала за предлог.
Можеш ли објаснити мало више о томе како СОСИн Продавница може да помогне малим и средњим предузећима приступ финансијским производима (кредитима, фондовима и сл) како би се омогућио њихов раст?
I think it's probably been that small confusion in the translation. Sosa's store expects assistance as a small or medium enterprise by providing access to financial products (loans, funds, etc.). In order to ensure its survival and subsequent growth!
If I were you I would edit your proposal to make it clear that SoSIn will offer products for the small and medium enterprises. It is a bit confusing and it may jeopardize your entry.
You can go to "your profile" and then to Edit entry.
First, I would highly recommend that you answer all the questions. Do not leave any blank responses as these won't be considered by the judges. The more information you give, the better so the Changemakers community can also help you.
Second, your proposal is not clear. As I said, please try to explain in depth how SoSIn will help small and medium enterprises to get finance.
I am working on the G20 Finance Challenge giving assistance specific for Eastern Europe and Central Asia so let me know if you need any further assistance.
My goal is to try to get the best from your idea and to increase your chances in this challenge.
Now it's a little clearer your question. Sosa's shop has a service for small, medium and even large enterprises. Sosa's service them as customers and provides them information about products and services according to their requirements. What is brought into confusion, is that you have inserted the word ristup financial access to financial products (loans, funds, etc.).. Sosa's concept can not bring all of its benefits and innovation that would endanger its survival. Reviewers for the competition for the best innovation NTI 2010 in Serbia are well understood and assessed.
I thank you for an open offer to help. So far as the author improve my concept Sosa, preparing a new version of the marketing plan takes into account the relevant comments, participate in contests and trying to secure the greater specific weight for my project.
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Hi Nenad,
Thanks for your proposal.
Could you explain a bit more how SOSIn Shop can help small and medium firms to access financial products (loans, funds etc.) in order to enable their growth?
I would love to hear your thoughts.
Kind regards,
Renata
_____________________________________
Финансијама за мала и средња предузећа
Поздрав Ненад,
Хвала за предлог.
Можеш ли објаснити мало више о томе како СОСИн Продавница може да помогне малим и средњим предузећима приступ финансијским производима (кредитима, фондовима и сл) како би се омогућио њихов раст?
Волео бих да чујем ваше мишљење.
С поштовањем,
Рената
Hi Renata,
Thank you for your comment.
I love to hear any thoughts about my concept.
I think it's probably been that small confusion in the translation. Sosa's store expects assistance as a small or medium enterprise by providing access to financial products (loans, funds, etc.). In order to ensure its survival and subsequent growth!
Sincerely,
Nenad
Hi Nenad,
If I were you I would edit your proposal to make it clear that SoSIn will offer products for the small and medium enterprises. It is a bit confusing and it may jeopardize your entry.
You can go to "your profile" and then to Edit entry.
First, I would highly recommend that you answer all the questions. Do not leave any blank responses as these won't be considered by the judges. The more information you give, the better so the Changemakers community can also help you.
Second, your proposal is not clear. As I said, please try to explain in depth how SoSIn will help small and medium enterprises to get finance.
I am working on the G20 Finance Challenge giving assistance specific for Eastern Europe and Central Asia so let me know if you need any further assistance.
My goal is to try to get the best from your idea and to increase your chances in this challenge.
Kind regards,
Renata
Hi Renata,
Now it's a little clearer your question. Sosa's shop has a service for small, medium and even large enterprises. Sosa's service them as customers and provides them information about products and services according to their requirements. What is brought into confusion, is that you have inserted the word ristup financial access to financial products (loans, funds, etc.).. Sosa's concept can not bring all of its benefits and innovation that would endanger its survival. Reviewers for the competition for the best innovation NTI 2010 in Serbia are well understood and assessed.
I thank you for an open offer to help. So far as the author improve my concept Sosa, preparing a new version of the marketing plan takes into account the relevant comments, participate in contests and trying to secure the greater specific weight for my project.
Sincerely,
Nenad
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